Defanim's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[HCJ Saves The Day (CLAY)]

same old crap

This is as good as Knox (but thats not saying much) but you should try and be original.

Nonsense-Ninja responds:

WTF how is it not original, its not the same style as anyone else and the jokes are made up so WTF

[New Bill Cosby show ep.1]

try again

I think youre one of the better clay animators on this site but this is some horrid work, absolutely terrible. The fact that it scored 3.5 so far is insane, it says alot about the intelligence of your audience.
Front page material? questionable to say the least.In short it sucked dont make another one, instead put that decent animation skill to work on something more deserving.
Here are two words i want you to think about before making another animation; "plot" and "funny".

[Maxin Relaxin Trailor]

Misplaced

you shouldve submitted that on NG alpha, previews/incomplete work shouldnbt be on here.

SpinningCubeClock responds:

i did. u can even checkyourself. nobody checks the alphas. whats the point!

[I Wanna Rock!]

Slight improvement

Its marginally better than your previous one but thats not saying much is it. Mouth flapping isnt lip syncing unless your going to have different mouth shapes then its best to omit it. It doesnt affect the film too much when there's no lip sync but when there is and its done poorly its very distracting.
Also dont put the ng preloader against a white background because the loading bar is also white so its inivisible, i made the same mistake too.

PresidentEvilX responds:

Well, you pointed out everything I had stated in my description, so I agree with you on the mouth flapping. Also, alot of people in here don't even use lip sync, then just make mouthless faces (like you said) so I'm still going to do it, distracting or not. ;)

[Jenny Jenny]

Very bad

The claymation was incredibly sloppy, the song dragged on way too long and the animation wasnt really good enough to keep me watching till the end. You also got lazy (putting paper under the figures so you could twirl them without animating), i know it probably took you a long time to make and was probably very tedious but im sorry to say it wasnt worth the effort.
Next time make a shorter film and put more effort into the quality of the figures/animation.

PresidentEvilX responds:

Hey, it was more first try, it was mostly experimentation. And that was made a long time ago, and my claymation has gotten better, just to let you know. ;)

[Freedom (clay)]

Better than knox, but thats not saying much.

i think the music really carried the film, I think your clay animation is pretty decent.
Fact of the matter is all claymation ive seen on NG is substandard.
If i were u id put a little more effort into the production side of things.
Good work though.

[Gamespout - Episode 1]

not bad

It was kind of funny, mainly because of the accents but the voice recording wasnt too great (u kept on blowing into the mic).
Other than that pretty decent flash, i bet episode 2 will be better.

FredilliamIC responds:

Its not our foult, the mic sucked! and it almost dident work!

[Dranking Helmet]

i liked it

FREEDOM!
the milk was a nice touch!

[Encore:Bush n Osama Show]

Not bad at all

I have a question though, when Dubya screams at the end, the audio ur using for it, is it sam kinison?

[Blue and Red vol.1]

this would be good if it was complete

you called this an intro but it was really just a bit of the movie, not exactly an introduction. it'd be cool if it was a finished product, you really dont want to upload incomplete works...for me it kind of defeats the purpose.
i think its a pretty good animation, just finish it and add sound effects.