Slight improvement
Its marginally better than your previous one but thats not saying much is it. Mouth flapping isnt lip syncing unless your going to have different mouth shapes then its best to omit it. It doesnt affect the film too much when there's no lip sync but when there is and its done poorly its very distracting.
Also dont put the ng preloader against a white background because the loading bar is also white so its inivisible, i made the same mistake too.